I might be a little biased with this one, but the way you have been able to capture the essence of a person while working mostly off reference sketches and a pair of photos to create this piece is truly impressive.
The decision to emphasize her curves brings a greater impact to the image, as you pointed out, is one of her best features.
Also considering that this is the first ever instance of a pinup paramedic uniform, this alone should be mark of mention, in that you had to create the entire thing from scratch which is even more of an achievement.
Some gorgeous detail work here in the outfits!! The bra on the paramedic girl looks stunning with the lace there, the nurse's frills are a lot of fun and the transparent skirt is a really nice look. The way you colored that works really nicely here and the expressions all around are quite lovely.
A lot to like and I hope the commissioner thinks so too!